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Pages After Dark's avatar

This was really good, and a great closing line! Keep writing, fellow writer!

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Basically Human's avatar

Thanks, Pages. I'm glad you liked the story. I read a few of your poems. Very nice.

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Michael Logan's avatar

Very nice. Do you submit your work to lit mags?

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Basically Human's avatar

Thanks, Michael. I’ve never submitted to a magazine. I’ve just started writing again after a very long break, so it hasn’t crossed my mind. Stay in touch. Thanks again for reading.

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Michael Logan's avatar

I know the feeling. I took eight years off. Given the quality of your writing, I would say you have a very good shot at getting in some good mags and placing/winning comps, if you ever felt like going down that route. Good luck and I look forward to reading more.

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Basically Human's avatar

Thank you, Michael. This is the first forum where I've ever shared my work, and it means a great deal to know that I'm doing alright. Much love from the underground.

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FranB's avatar

Very atmospheric!

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